My Process Journal
this blog is about my peace of sports equipment that can be used for PE i will also create a design for this will one day when in older I will manufacture and for this reason it will not be permitted to get used by others.investigation task
here are my their disigns
shoe design 
this shoe is perfect for fast and bissy people because of the fact it has no lases. it has an adjusting strap for this purpose this can be a little bit of a defect for it lessons the shoes morbidity.
this sheo is a stileish and extreme confortoble sheo perfect for teens it has many perks like exchange ablepadding but it looks to good to be used in a PE lesson
this shoe is a grate shoe that is quite amazing it uses Velcro straps instead of of lases this is amazing cause it is quick easy and and better to use.
conclusion:
I choose the second shoe cause cause it stilesh and its a classic design for a shoe
advertiments
this sole is made for grip perfect for wet surfaces
this sole is mad for flash and its made of only the best of athlets
lenvarks:it has a nice look to it
kranks: easy to remember
Plan: this will tell you my plan to create it.
this is my plan
this is what im gonna use
what i did
this i may have done be for but i add some dtale
Sup Rainier,
ReplyDeleteYour blog is good so far, and you have picked a good type of sports equipment to do.
You could have a bit more of spacing between the posts, because you squashed everything into 1 post. and you have also not written down your reflections,
regards and well wished,
Abhishek
Sup Rainier,
ReplyDeleteSorry about the other comment, I could not finish it off.
Your blog is good so far, and you have picked a good type of sports equipment to do becuse, sports shoes with removable shoes will have very good sales as well as you can create a lot of designs with it.
You could have a bit more of spacing between the posts, because you squashed everything into 1 post. and you have also not written down your reflections, If I were to give you a mark out of 10 (Don't Think I am mean but I am going to look at it from a techers perspective) I would give you a 3/10 because your investigate task doesnt cover half of the things that Ms. Pecoraro set us to do on the blog, you have'nt got any reflections and your posts are'nt organised.
Regards and Well Wishes,
Abhishek
Hello Rainier,
ReplyDeleteSince you only have 1 post you have made my job much easier and I will be giving your marks on this one post.
For your investigate task you got a 3, mainly because you lacked in varieties of software and ad material, you also lost marks because you did not Do a survey and you did not include references.
For your design task you got a 3 as well. In this case you were missing the annotations for your logo, evaluations for all 3 of the designs.
For your plan task you got a 4 The only thing that pulled you down here is the tables that you did, but the rest was good.
For your create task you got a 5. You did everything well, but could improve.
Your final mark is a 4, but you could improve.
Regards,
Abhishek Benny